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बे-निशां है अब के सफर अपना

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कहें किससे दर्द-ए-ज़िगर अपना
कौन है यहाँ पे आखिर अपना 

कभी था के तेरा मुंतज़िर था मैं
अब है के हूँ मुंतज़िर अपना
(मुंतज़िर — expectant,
one who waits, प्रतीक्षक)

अंधेरों की सिम्त बढ़ते जाते हैं
बे-निशां है अब के सफर अपना

रोता हूँ तुम्हें अब कुछ ऐसे के
उजड़ गया हो जैसे घर अपना

ऐ क़ातिल मेरी रूह को चैन नहीं
मेरे ज़िगर में उतार खंज़र अपना

मैंने उसे खुदा भी कहा “आकाश”
मिज़ाज़ बहुत है, काफ़िर अपना

Kahein kisse dard-e-jigar apna
Kaun hai yahan pe aakhir apna 

Kabhi tha k tera muntazir tha main
Ab hai ke hun muntazir apna

Andheron ki simt badte jate hain
Be nisha.n hai ab k safar apna

Rota hun tumhein ab kuchh aise ke
Ujad gya ho jaise ghar apna

Ae qaatil meri rooh ko chain nahi
Mere jigar mein utaar khanjar apna

Maine ose khuda bhi kaha “Akash”
Mizaaz bahut hai kaafir apna

22/11/2016 6:52 PM
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Sunny Singh is a poet, author and publisher. He lives in Jawali city of India, and he has written various poems (Gazal and Nazm) in Hindi and Urdu language. He is a very creative person and after listening to his poems, fans forced to him to write stories or novels. So, from there, he tried his hand at writing.
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48 comments on “बे-निशां है अब के सफर अपना

बहते पानी की तरह है फितरत- ए-इश्क•••••••••
रुकता भी नहीं- थकता भी नहीं….. थमता भी नहीं…..
और मिलता भी नहीं….

Fill se bhi jyada pyara likha hai aap ne

Shabdon ki kami ho gayi bahut lajawab hai

prem koi bandhan nahi hai….aur prem kisi sirf ek shakhs k baare mein bhi nahi hai ye kisi k liye bhi ho sakta hai ..desh k liye ya maa k liye ya fir apne ghar k kutte k liye…maine en sab pe hi kuchh naa kuchh likha hai

But ek type ka bandhan nhi lgta hoga…….. Pyar me bandhna ….aajadi khatam …..aur fir whi jrurat …busy …..problems…….

haan haan aap achhi discussion kr rahe ho…lekin main humesha se hi prem pe regular likhna chahta tha….mujhe ye topic jyada chhuta hai ….aur iske baare mein hi likhna chahta hoon….poem mein gehari k liye os topic ko sirf feel hi karna nahi kafi hai ….oske sath jhudna aur ose jeena bhi eham hai.

But feel krke likhna ……….good……very good ….kuch bnawtipan nhi ….hme ye bat aapki bhut achii lgi

Lekin likhne ke liye sbki apni alag requirement hoti h ….jaise koi sorgul me likhna pasand krta h to koi akant me …..

Topic fir koi bhi ho love ya kuch bhi but topic bna kar likhna .,…….hme nhi achaa lgta

Aap ye mat sochna ki hm aako kuch kah rhe h …..bs apne thoughts bta rhe about poem ……
Likhte h jb hm to free hokar likhna chahte h na ki kisi topic se bandhkar

Agar kisi topic ko lekar poem likhte h to bandha hua sa feel hota h ….jaise kisi ne boundary khich di ho ……likhna spiritual type lgta h ki jb apni mn ki bat likh lo ek drawing ki trh fir bad me pta chale ki aaj mere mn me ye dukh tha ya ye khushi thi……

Hme lgta h ki agar hm kisi topic ko lekar poem likhte h to केद

hahaha ok ji….lekin ye bilkul sahi hai prem kavita k liye prem ko jeena bahoot jaruri hai….aap agr prem pe likhte ho aur lambhe samay tk aur lagatar likhna chahte ho toh prem k ehsaas ko chhuye bagair ye mumkin nahi….2015 k end se pehle main kuchh hi poems likh paya tha lekin jb prem ko mann mein basa liya tb se ab tk bahoot sari gazalien aur kavitayein likhi hain

Hm aapki poem to padte h uske sath sath comments bhi padte h…….

Aapne kha na ‘ mohbat ke bina ye mumkin nhi’ ……….hm isse sahmat nhi….

Akash ji phli bar hm aapse agree nhi h……..

Mohabbat k bagair ye mumkin bhi toh nahi 🙂

Bahut daraaz fasana hai ye
Ik zakhm bahut purana hai ye
Ik geet virah ka umar bhar hi
Humko bas ab gaana hai ye
(Daraaz….lambha)(fasana…kahani)

jrur apko bhi kisi se mohabbat hogi, isliye aap itni badhiya poem or gazal likhte h…

ye meri khushnasibi hai k main aapke dil ka haal keh pata hu….aap mujhe padte hain, main aapka tahe-dil se behad shukarguzar hu ….meri gazalon k liye aapki es mohabbat ko mera tahe-dil se salam

hats off 2 u sir,
apki hr poem ko padhkr esa feel hota h jese ye meri zindgi pr hi likhi gyi ho……

aisi koi baat nahi hai ji….bas itna hai k jo likhta hu wo aapko pasand aa jata hai….toh kmall aap kr dete ho meri poems like kr k 🙂

ap ho he kmall….khuda ne kya demag dea ha..kya soch ha…kmall …

oh all poems are written by me. I’m a poet, and author.

huu I ws confused is any guy fell this things dts y I askd u

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Sunny Singh is a poet, author and publisher. He lives in Jawali city of India, and he has written various poems (Gazal and Nazm) in Hindi and Urdu language. He is a very creative person and after listening to his poems, fans forced to him to write stories or novels. So, from there, he tried his hand at writing.
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