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उसी से अपना अब हाल पूछूँगा

 

 

Sad boy, alone boy, poetry, poems, shayari, gazal
इस जन्म खता हो गयी इश्क़ में

वो   मिलेगा  तो  इक  बात  पूछूँगा
आखिर क्या था  मेरा गुनाह पूछूँगा
(गुनाह … fault, gilt, sin)

मुझे  नहीं  खबर  अपने  दिल  की
उसी से  अपना  अब  हाल  पूछूँगा

लोग  कहते   हैं   सब  पागल  मुझे
उसकी  आँखों  से  ही  नाम पूछूँगा

किसी रोज़  उसकी रहगुज़र से ही
मुझे क्यों  है उसका इंतज़ार पूछूँगा
(रहगुज़र… road, path)

इस जन्म  खता  हो  गयी  इश्क़  में
अगले जन्म वाइज़ खानदान पूछूँगा
(खता… mistake, slip, oversight, error)
(वाइज़… preacher, sermonizer)
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उसे   भी   है  क्या  मोहब्बत  तुमसे
वो  मिलेगा   तो   “आकाश”  पूछूँगा

 

Wo    milega    to    ik    baat   puchhunga
Aakhir kya  tha  mera  gunah  puchhunga

Mujhe     nahi     khabar     apne     dil     ki
Usi    se    apna    ab     haal    puchhunga

Log    kehte    hain    sab    pagal    mujhe
Uski  aankhon  se  hi  naam  puchhunga

Kisi      roz      uski      rahguazar     se     hi
Mujhe kyun hai uska intezar puchhunga

Es    janam    khata   ho    gyi    ishq   mein
Aghle  janam  wai’z  khandan   puchhunga

Ose    bhi    hai     kya    mohabbat     tumse
Wo     milega    to h    “Akash”     puchhunga

 

 

10/12/2016 8:22 PM
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Sunny Singh is a poet, author and publisher. He lives in Jawali city of India, and he has written various poems (Gazal and Nazm) in Hindi and Urdu language. He is a very creative person and after listening to his poems, fans forced to him to write stories or novels. So, from there, he tried his hand at writing.
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54 comments on “उसी से अपना अब हाल पूछूँगा

Tarif jayda karoo to wo chaplusi hogi… Itne axe likhe ho ki dimag teri chehra ko yad krti h .. Or dil tujhe dhanybad khta h

Khoya itana kuch ki pir panaa na aayha…
Pyar khar to liya per jatana naa aayha…..
Aa gaye tum is dil me pahali hi nazar mein….
Bus hume aapke dil mein samana na aayha……..

apni likhi koi gazal send kro …fir samjhata hu eske baare mein

ji bikul behar (meter) gazal k sheiron ki length hai….aur sheir ki length same honi chahiye…..pr ye thoda difficult hai…..lekin 1-2 lafz aage- pichhe ho sakte hain…..yadi ek sheir mein aapke 5 hi lafz hain aur dusre mein 8-10 toh ese kehte hain k gazal meter k bahar ja rhi hai…..5-7 itna difference chalta hai

Akash bhai ग़ज़ल में बहर होना जरुरी है।मार्गदर्शन करे

QKi aaj ka Touched line tha jo ki direct heart ko touch kiya….

wah bahoot bahoot umdaa…..lazwab….bahoot pasand aaya mujhe ye sheir

खुदा जाने की कौन सा गुनाह कर
बैठे हम अब
तम्मनाओ वाली उम्र में तजुर्बे मिल
रहे हैं.!!

माशाल्लाह…. बहुत खूब…..!!!

वाह क्या बात है

Oh WO aap ki tariff ki thi waise yaad h

aapka naam Dolly Singh hai ji…aap bhool gye the naa esiliye yaad dila diya 😀

Maza aa gaye parfact ho aap haal-e dil batane main Akash Ji

Aap ki Gajal pad kar hum to apna hi naam bhul gaye sahab bahut khub awesome

ese likhte likhte meri bhi aankhein chhalk gyi thi 🙂

bhaut hi sunder lajabab
kiya bat hai

Hm bhi wait kr rhe the …
..

लब्जें बयाँ आपके लाजवाब हैं।

Aapki is poem ne rula hi diya aakash ji ………..dil ko chu gyi ……

wo thodi site mein problem aa gyi thi …esi bajah se post nahi kr paya……humesha ki tarah bahoot bahoot shukriya 🙂

Kal rat se check kar rahain the page apka apki gazal padhne ke liye..

Kya bat hain… Dada..

Lajwaab…. Humesha ki tarh..

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Sunny Singh is a poet, author and publisher. He lives in Jawali city of India, and he has written various poems (Gazal and Nazm) in Hindi and Urdu language. He is a very creative person and after listening to his poems, fans forced to him to write stories or novels. So, from there, he tried his hand at writing.
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